***good Evening..........Thy Love........... Poem by Dr subhendu kar

***good Evening..........Thy Love...........

Rating: 2.8


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Oh dear friend, moon is shining
Waking the heart from deep slumber
would you not tell me your love story
by the night in its deep ecstasy
still we call God by the love for blessings
as moon ness bedecks by its letters of gold

love is the beauty by the man enshrined
love of truth thy name is God emblazoned
as beauty thy love is woman ensemble
bud still fails to bloom when veiled
lotus still withdraw its petal as intoned

warmth yet never touches the soigné encore
it is the sweet love of the parent when myth
to see their bloods basking in the fame
life flows resplendent still glows undisguised

love is immortal in the ages and eons entwined
man comes and goes leaving their names enticed
love yet dazzles by the glory of Taj Mahal
as I call you too by your love far from behind
crowd when beckons to the name as ensign

love as engraved over the rock of time by history
glory when blazes the name by the fame
love and bliss seems to flow across the time
heart when ingrains as blood flows in the vain
it is the scarlet red whirling across blood enthralling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 01 June 2008

A fascinating and capturing poem of love Dr. Kar! ! Elegant for sure! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Stary Night 01 June 2008

wow.. i love this poem its really really good. keep it up: ]

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Oone Tattered 03 April 2014

Passionate love revealed in the heart for all occasions, most astounding poet

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

love is immortal in the ages and eons entwined Rachel Ann Butler

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Marieta Maglas 18 June 2009

a wonderful visual cognitive metaphor: ''as beauty thy love is woman ensemble bud still fails to bloom when veiled lotus still withdraw its petal as intoned'' well written poem...10++

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Patricia Gale 31 December 2008

Wonderful work, indepth piece

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Catherine Rica Cosico 01 June 2008

Capturing one's heart with LOVE...i could feel a great love of work in your poem...a 10+

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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