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Wow, the seduction of poem. That's what it is; your poems seduce me. So ingeniously written, it draws you in..(smile)

simply straightforward words! ! ! excellent! ! !

Sonya, I love this poem. The sentiments ring so true for me too. If something touches your heart it matters not whether it has the correct pentameters, syallables or otherwise. To me that is what poetry does. You captured it perfectly in this lovely poem. HG: -) xx

Poem grabs just like that........ Sublimation is the focal point...... Good write, Sonya.

Like this, you have caught it, thats how it is

the lines and the flow on this very poem are brilliantly done..outstanding write