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Goodbye

Rating: 4.4

Your eyes said kiss me,
My heart said kiss her,
But we said goodbye,
And just walked away.

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x... x... 06 September 2007

I love the simplicity and truth of this wonder...It reminds me of another ending to one of my first poems here..'Lost Chances'.....Though this one is shorter at least you got close enough to almost 'kiss' yet your end result gone, lost chances, like the ending of mine. Just beautiful.love, love, love it. love, marci.xo

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Princess Me 05 September 2007

Hello David! You know I loved it! You are a romantic at heart...it shows!

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David Harris 05 September 2007

David have known many moments like these. Poignant feeling here. Wonderful write as usual. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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