David Barlow
Manchester, England.
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The Stranger

Rating: 5.0
Your Suicide Note really tore at my heart,
When I saw your picture and read what you said.
It effected me deeply and I could not sleep,
For thinking of you, not wanting you dead.

There is obviously sadness effecting your life,
From the hurt you describe, in the words that you write.
The loss of a loved one, a mother’s neglect,
I don’t know the detail but the hurts really deep.
Fresh faced, mischievous, pretty and cute,
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Tsira Goge 10 February 2008
Hello Devid... I do not hesitate to tell, Without tear could not read, thanks for such a poem and for the kind soul..... Tsira
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Marta Xoxx 22 October 2007
Awsome. Strong poem, I really like it.
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Linda Weischedel 17 August 2007
This is an amazingly STRONG write of a poem David. I had to read it twice. Not because of the subject manner, but because of the way you genuinely care for this 'Stranger' I like your style. Always, Linda
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David Harris 27 July 2007
David, I wrote a poem not long ago called A Stranger. Not the same as this and you sound like the stranger in that poem of mine. A person with an outstretched hand to help. Another wonderful penning from you. I beginning to like your style. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
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David dfsg 22 July 2007
I myself have been witness to suicide and know how it really is such a sad, terrible thing and I think you’ve expressed it very accurately, Well written.
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Marci Made 09 June 2007
No one, absolutely no one have I ever seen show so much heart and concern for another.......Very admirable traits, especially when rarely seen in a man.....Your compassion in here may help more than just 'one' here, hold on! .....marci.xo
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