i never thought i'd love you
or have to say goodbye
i new there was no forever
because you always made me cry
you held me in your arms
told me your feelings were true
as i looked in to your eyes
i new just what you'd do
you told me that you loved me
and would always feel this way
told me you would never leave me
then i watched you walk away
now you say you miss me
and that we can make it work
but all i can think about
is every time you were a jerk
The reader can sense your passion within your heart. Thank you for sharing. Scott
ohhh. my dear i know just how you feel. very nice write. true in feelings and thought. nice work. Jen
the last word made me laugh................good poem keep the good work up
a very common way of a male deceiving a female. He promises the stars, the moon and even the planets and the sun just to make the poor female to fall for him. After he gets what he wants, the smart guy is nowhere to be seen, he disappeared like a popping bubble in the air. Do you agree? Good work, keep writing. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i feel the emotion in every word. beautiful yet sad.