Goodbye Forever Poem by Sonya Florentino

Goodbye Forever

Rating: 5.0


I can't go near you
Let me stay right here
Away from you
Where everything is clear

I cannot touch you
A lesson I've learned
I can't be with you
Without getting burned

I can't go with you
You know I've tried
I cannot have you
You'll never be mine

So let me say this
For one last time
My love, my love
Goodbye

Tuesday, December 9, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 17 August 2009

Perfectly captured, the feeling of something delicious..that will definitely wound you every time. You gotta love those rhymes..

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Laurie Hill 11 April 2009

Such a sad, wistful write Sonya............lovely..10

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Kate Warner 09 December 2008

This is beautiful, very simplistic, with very good use of words :)

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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