Goodbye Forever Poem by Sonya Florentino

Goodbye Forever

Rating: 5.0


I can't go near you
Let me stay right here
Away from you
Where everything is clear

I cannot touch you
A lesson I've learned
I can't be with you
Without getting burned

I can't go with you
You know I've tried
I cannot have you
You'll never be mine

So let me say this
For one last time
My love, my love
Goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 17 August 2009

Perfectly captured, the feeling of something delicious..that will definitely wound you every time. You gotta love those rhymes..

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Laurie Hill 11 April 2009

Such a sad, wistful write Sonya............lovely..10

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Kate Warner 09 December 2008

This is beautiful, very simplistic, with very good use of words :)

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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