# Barely Writing Poem by Sonya Florentino

# Barely Writing

Rating: 5.0

Oh my god
Why am I doing this
Writing poetry
And giving away
my secrets

© 2009 Sonya Florentino


Oh! Sonya I feel the same. But isn't it interesting that other people have secrets like ours... These few words have certainly evoked many comments. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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Duh Huh 26 July 2009

Isnt it something how we just put ourselves out there for all to see. Exposing ourselves to whatever may be said. A certain type of courage is required i think. :) Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

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Alison Cassidy 26 July 2009

I'm sure there are many who will nod in agreement on reading this - but few who could have put it so cleverly and succinctly. Excellent piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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i feel the same sometimes but secrets are beautiful, our expressions.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 July 2009

oh! its sweet! yea, bcoz poets are exploring beauties and they are discoverer! 10+

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

Ha, I loved this. I lurked at poemhunter for years, too petrified to post a word. Now I sit about day and night thinking, did I write about that secret yet? You have hit the nail right on the head now. (smile)

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Rakesh Bedi 03 August 2009

See, how secretive are the poets! The more they write the more they crave to share their secrets! ! Isn't it funny? ? ?

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Shirley Woods 29 July 2009

Exactly how I feel today - realising all my stuff is logged on google now. Hell - what if a certain someone reads it!

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Smiley Hooker 28 July 2009

Poetry is a freedom of expression. Readers are always craving for a little something about us...the more you bare yourself, the more they get hooked. Any shocking revelations, dear? just kidding...ha ha ha! This is short but speaks a lot. Well done! :)

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LOVEFOOL Aka 27 July 2009

So true so funny 10++

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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