# Barely Writing Poem by Sonya Florentino

# Barely Writing

Rating: 5.0

Oh my god
Why am I doing this
Writing poetry
And giving away
my secrets

© 2009 Sonya Florentino

Kesav Easwaran 17 July 2009

Continue with wrting...that will surely give you more secrets to share! Good piece Sonya...i liked the imaginative way you relate God and secrets there in your lines...thanks...10

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nomad omnia 21 July 2009

you are a magician of secrets - a secret within a secret can never be known. We can only guess...and so each takes with them a different, delicous, truth.

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Lillian Thomas 21 July 2009

This is wonderful! and the title fits to a 't.'

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Sandra Martyres 21 July 2009

We all do it instinctively Sonya...I guess it is these 'secrets' that inspire poetry

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 July 2009

Well, you have revealed another secret in this poem. Wonderful, Sonya......10.

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

Ha, I loved this. I lurked at poemhunter for years, too petrified to post a word. Now I sit about day and night thinking, did I write about that secret yet? You have hit the nail right on the head now. (smile)

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Rakesh Bedi 03 August 2009

See, how secretive are the poets! The more they write the more they crave to share their secrets! ! Isn't it funny? ? ?

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Shirley Woods 29 July 2009

Exactly how I feel today - realising all my stuff is logged on google now. Hell - what if a certain someone reads it!

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Smiley Hooker 28 July 2009

Poetry is a freedom of expression. Readers are always craving for a little something about us...the more you bare yourself, the more they get hooked. Any shocking revelations, dear? just kidding...ha ha ha! This is short but speaks a lot. Well done! :)

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LOVEFOOL Aka 27 July 2009

So true so funny 10++

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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