Goodbye Here And Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Goodbye Here And

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Goodbye here and
Sunday,9th August 2020

Three poems in a row
fail to show
any response from the readers
and many poems this before too

it is better to live on the inactive side
and decide
about the space
and escape the race

I relentlessly pursued
and viewed
the poems of others
it has proved worst founded fears

one has to wait for 24 hours
whether your poem appeared there
then eyes concentrate to see if anyone has read
to your utter dismay you find none and feel dead

the river must dry its water
and stop there
if found a no further inroad
get lost on the way before reaching sea bund

so far so much good
but nothing has been understood
I opt for "Goodbye"
and try better accommodation

Dr. Jadia Hasmukh
Note: Muse India here

Goodbye Here And
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2020

S. R Chandralekha Very touchy 🌷🌷🌷 1 Delete or hide this Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2020

welcome sabrina rubin 1 Edit or delete this Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2020

ate & Time: 8/9/2020 8: 23: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58938836 - Goodbye Here And Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: Poems float in row and sometimes river may die or divert the way. Some may search for new accommodation. But we want to see and read your beautiful poems here in PH. Nothing can be understood but so much good an be perceived. This poem is wonderful goodbye note that makes a reader very emotional. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2020

Poems float in row and sometimes river may die or divert the way. Some may search for new accommodation. But we want to see and read your beautiful poems here in PH. Nothing can be understood but so much good an be perceived. This poem is wonderful goodbye note that makes a reader very emotional. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2020

I opt for " Goodbye" and try better accommodation Dr. Jadia Hasmukh Note: Muse India

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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