Goodbye here and
Sunday,9th August 2020
Three poems in a row
fail to show
any response from the readers
and many poems this before too
it is better to live on the inactive side
and decide
about the space
and escape the race
I relentlessly pursued
and viewed
the poems of others
it has proved worst founded fears
one has to wait for 24 hours
whether your poem appeared there
then eyes concentrate to see if anyone has read
to your utter dismay you find none and feel dead
the river must dry its water
and stop there
if found a no further inroad
get lost on the way before reaching sea bund
so far so much good
but nothing has been understood
I opt for "Goodbye"
and try better accommodation
Dr. Jadia Hasmukh
Note: Muse India here
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ate & Time: 8/9/2020 8: 23: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58938836 - Goodbye Here And Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: Poems float in row and sometimes river may die or divert the way. Some may search for new accommodation. But we want to see and read your beautiful poems here in PH. Nothing can be understood but so much good an be perceived. This poem is wonderful goodbye note that makes a reader very emotional. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned....10
Poems float in row and sometimes river may die or divert the way. Some may search for new accommodation. But we want to see and read your beautiful poems here in PH. Nothing can be understood but so much good an be perceived. This poem is wonderful goodbye note that makes a reader very emotional. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned....10
I opt for " Goodbye" and try better accommodation Dr. Jadia Hasmukh Note: Muse India
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
S. R Chandralekha Very touchy 🌷🌷🌷 1 Delete or hide this Like · Reply · 1m