! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***grace Of Innocence ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***grace Of Innocence ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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gleams that guide by life onshore ….
light yet emblazons soul up thrust
flag enshrined flutters above
parade feels pride of crown ingrained,

where is reeks of hidden harrowing
ages and eons rave beneath and beyond
pales of night of when speckle to dew
as earth departs sun being lurid of lone voice

green of universe slips away to hide
yet it tears from darkness soaked in clouds
grace fails to withstand fluffs rolling
wounds of pain rips through vale

tears of rain encircles yet engrossing
by shadowed veil of endearment
breeze of heaven hales of innocence
lacking flares enlightened to guide

does moments of time defray to disown
awaiting rays of hope by dulcet red
yet in embracing silhouettes of pall
by brazen cup of sorrow yet intoning

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 21 July 2010

As if through a dense forest at night traveling alone. Dense and Dark only the light from the heart encouraging to proceed. Yes, its the experience of reading your poem. Flashing the lines as the faint light of beginning a dawn: green of universe slips away to hide yet it tears from darkness soaked in clouds grace fails to withstand fluffs rolling wounds of pain rips through vale powerful your talent really in search of original diamond in the words-like coal-mine. Fantastic your style of crafting the thoughts. Thank you very much. Write more and more... Regards, 10+ pranab

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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