poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Curves Of Meaning *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Time reels though moments in seconds
everything earthly has its own rise and fall
heaving mysteries encored within
as truth dissipates in direction of reality
deciphering code of illusions.

From dawn to dusk and beyond
we do have own dreams
as soliloquies in mid summer
curves of meaning never crunch
into fear of reality or religion
as genuflection of dew retiring
over grass blade to golden rays
for sun wakening into redemption,

passage of time gets defrayed
as reclaimed through emancipation
dawn riffles in dulcet tones
eyes smear mystery refuting darkness
by flornce of beauteous glow
and twilight cries of its innocence
in silhouettes of own delusion

Poem Submitted: Monday, August 24, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 25, 2009

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  • warner treuter (4/21/2010 2:49:00 AM)

    Had a free second so just dropped by for a second reading. Second thoughts: Perhaps you have same set of time-conditions so ask your computer for an astonishing amount of help; as Bhagwan Rajneesh often said: 'hmmm? '

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  • Bonnie Lundgren (2/9/2010 3:44:00 AM)

    The curves of meaning lead to delusion only because man looks in the wrong place. The rise and fall of the earth is the cry of the earth for renewal, for not all life is full of joy since man chose wickedness and passed it on to all his children. But God in heaven reaches down to earth in love, to see if we choose to be reconciled.

    This poem is rich in words, like a meal made well, yet lacks unity. In some phrases the meaning is lost
    Thank you for writing what you see.

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (11/29/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Re: hello,

    Dear fellow poet
    your poems were wonderful
    you are very talented
    I enjoyed reading your other poems to.
    I look up to you.
    Thank you.

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  • warner treuter (9/12/2009 9:09:00 PM)

    In poems of metaphorical magnitude such as yours, some words stand out as needing exactitude in their spelling in order to assure a reader of what the author had in mind. In this philosophical poem I am not sure of the word 'though' in the first sentence and my old dictionary does not have the word 'flornce' in it. Though I like the general tenor of the poem, even were I clever enough, which is doubtful, I cannot arrive at a meaning that covers the whole import of this poem. I would prefer to but simply cannot. I may be obtuse in this but I thought I would bring it to your notice as it may, as I think it is, or may not, be cogent to the imagery. Enjoyed, anyway.

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  • Adens Kamwi (9/12/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    'evrything earthly has its own rise and fall' what a statement, and a very true one at that......

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  • Allan Macli BorgesAllan Macli Borges (9/8/2009 12:46:00 AM)

    wow! great one. the depth it reaches is really far beyond... writen with eloquent words.10.

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  • Jester's PJester's P (9/7/2009 11:59:00 PM)

    striking and devotional...

    From dawn to dusk and beyond
    we do have own dreams...yes we do dream and that made us alive.

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  • Jen Capaldi (9/7/2009 11:53:00 AM)

    suhendu,
    you have elogquently penned a poem that touches topics that all of us in time reflect upon in different times in our lives. Time and our own moratlity, and what we do with the time that we have and does any of it have true meaning. we all wonder if we have lived our lives accordingly so that at the end of our days we have left behind an uncompromised legecy, not only of ourselves but also to those we have taught and left behind. beautifly written and very imaginative. i again applaud your mastery of writing.
    Jen

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  • true Little angel ...! ! ! (9/7/2009 6:08:00 AM)

    love it aloooot. it has a meaning and full of imagery. (and that what i like in poetry) ... well written..! go on writing...

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  • Rachel Butler (9/6/2009 2:39:00 PM)

    From dawn to dusk and beyond
    we do have own dreams

    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (9/6/2009 5:51:00 AM)

    Full of vivid images. Rich imagery.

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (9/6/2009 12:26:00 AM)

    Very meaningful poem.
    Well penned
    Enjoyed reading it

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  • Anjali Sinha (9/4/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    time reels
    moments pass
    morning goes
    evening dawns
    and life goes on
    lovely poem dear Shub
    surely a tenner from me
    anjali

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  • Vijay Menon (9/4/2009 3:25:00 AM)

    very fine poem i liked it read it many times10+++

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  • Vidyadhar DurgekarVidyadhar Durgekar (9/4/2009 3:06:00 AM)

    Philosophy, imagery and diction masterly weaved impacting one to search the soul

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  • Cherry Sha (9/4/2009 2:33:00 AM)

    Everything earthy has its own rise and fall... a wonderful thought captured so beautifully.. thanks.. :)

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  • Alison Cassidy (9/4/2009 2:32:00 AM)

    A reflective and masterful expression of truth and the circular nature of life where time and place are as elusive as thistledown. Your poem is eloquent. Your wisdom is beyond words. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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  • Mohammed AlbalushiMohammed Albalushi (9/2/2009 4:41:00 PM)

    wonderful poem with deep meaning

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  • Pandian Angelina (9/2/2009 1:32:00 PM)

    curves of meaning never crunch
    into fear of reality or religion
    as genuflection of dew retiring
    over grass blade to golden rays
    for sun wakening into redemption,
    Dear poet friend,
    Your poem is full of thought
    And images resounding
    Like waves upon soul's shore
    Carrying subtle meanings
    From deep within the soul
    Which has plunged deeper
    Into a process of thought
    Deeper than a Ocean's heart!
    I echo the sentiments of our friend Mamta mam' who has said it all.

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  • Matt MooneyMatt Mooney (9/2/2009 12:57:00 PM)

    Abstract poetry coming from deep thought and unreleased emotion flowing free.

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