Gratitude When Versed Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Gratitude When Versed

Rating: 5.0


As the passion when blazed
by the glory of the love as glazed
Gratitude when curved in the heart
yet words of beauty to crave the art


the addiction when sways like silk
the mystery of love reflexes as gleams
I simply cannot but touch you ingrained
with my shadow as invisible as intoned

where are my words to whisper you
to tell the truth of love in gratitude
the grace as mute as lightening exotic
truth as reasoned sanguine by the flex

where is my verse to welcome you
to my realms of thought by the faith
and where is my sense of ingratitude
as I promise you the depth of love
when resourced by the quest of the rain

and where is the night when so blue
to hide you in my arms of the dream
as yet to delve you from the rose within
the fathom as heartfelt the dream as doused

as I honor you in the dream of moon
to hold you in my blood as deep red
I may ramble with you in resonance
by the query of love when concealed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Weischedel 27 December 2007

Very passionate in your wording Doc. I liked this a lot, another 10 for yah! Hugs, Linda

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Broken Peaces 23 December 2007

Top marks Dr. beautifully pennedand rich content a worthy read, have a good Christmass and an abundance of good will for the new year Chris

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rajagopal haran 23 December 2007

Let us be grateful to people who make us happy; they are the charming gardeners who make our souls blossom............................great poem Dr ............................................

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Sandra Fowler 23 December 2007

Beautiful imagery in this one, Dr.Kar. Your blue night paints a wonderful picture. Merry Christmas, my poet friend. Warm regards, Sandra

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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