Gravity Poem by M.J. Lemon

Gravity

Rating: 5.0


The degree
to which
you
may be
taken
seriously...

Thursday, July 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: grook,insight,philosophical ,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 22 July 2016

That made me chuckle at its wit, Mj, but I promptly schooled my face and became grave as befitted the wisdom of this saying. I am really taking a delight in these short shorts of yours- -you prove brevity is a brilliant tool in the hand of a master. 10+++++++++++++++++++++

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Mj Lemon 22 July 2016

Thank you so much, Susan. I was hoping with this poem that someone would have a second reading and a Hey Wait a Minute reaction!

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Kevin Patrick 13 August 2016

The really good Poets are the philosophers that say life's meaning both deliciously and succinctly, this is proof positive of that, although I do think gravity is more fun when it can be defied, thank you for proving size does not matter but this is still 10 x 10.

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Mj Lemon 09 August 2020

Thank you, Asim! Indeed, self doubt will compromise gravity...

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M Asim Nehal 06 August 2020

Only weight of self will bring down. Thoughtful gravity in 9 words.10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 June 2019

A fantastic write in gravity is made here amazingly. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem with us.

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Valsa George 30 January 2019

Gravity is beautifully and succinctly defined here! Well done dear friend!

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Mj Lemon 30 January 2019

Thank you so very much, Valsa. Always appreciated.

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Muhammad Ali 11 July 2017

just beautifull. and apply this defination in our relations, gravity is optimum of a mother.

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

A great insight, Muhammad. Thank you for reading.

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