Some of the greatest things in life are very seldom seen,
This is why we close our eyes when we kiss or cry or dream.
This statement has a lot of truth and i believed it well,
But after seeing your caring face i really cannot tell.
Because every single second spent knowing you i need
To keep my eyes wide open, almost seemed with greed.
Your radience is overwhelming and I'm completely drawn
To me you are perfection without you i am torn.
submit this to as many places as you can..everyone in the world needs to read this..at least twice
Welcome! Great write Sir Chris Harris! Keep it up I want to read more of your work. God Bless, Linda
I like the comparison of eyes closed with crying, dreaming and kissing. Nice job. -chuck
this is beautifully written. Some of the greatest things in life are very seldom seen, This is why we close our eyes when we kiss or cry or dreamgreat lines and they are so true. good job. Crystal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work