Green Dreams Poem by Will Barber

Green Dreams

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I dream of you, love.
My eyes are downcast
When you appear in my dreams.

Sueño contigo, mi amor.
mis ojos bajan la mirada
al verte en mis sueños.

Y, ¿por qué soñamos así?
Why do we so dream?
Because night dreams may
Lead us to see

Love transcending time,
A glimpse of the belovéd,
A glimpse of the the divine.

Te quiero verde, but not yet.
Much time may be left to us, love.
Flores nos reflejan.. The blossoms
Watch us from the meadows.

Ten cuidado mi amor:
Each step treads a minfield
Temorosos andamos
Our lips are sealed
No word could express
The dreams we dream.
Y los sueños sueños son.

2008

Dedicated to Luis Gil, who wholly improved my poem with his invaluable editing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 10 December 2008

Your dreams paint eloquent pictures of themselves. The lyrical, intense feelings do transcend time. An excellent write. I congratulate both you and Luis. As always, Sandra

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Will, it lifted my heart to see you posting..... and raised my ever-high admiration to breathe in its content. t x

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Joseph Poewhit 05 December 2008

Nothing like floating on a love cloud

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