Groceries Poem by M.J. Lemon

Groceries

Rating: 5.0

buying groceries
maxing out the credit card
selling the condo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D.N. Rebb 14 December 2024

That just about explains our pathetic social state in one Haiku. (make sure you keep aside some money for hot dogs for your Christmas dinner now)

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M.J. Lemon 20 December 2024

Too true, D.N., too true. Thanks for reading.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 January 2025

You nailed it Thanx for Sharing MJ Bravo! ! ! !

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Rob Lamberton 28 January 2025

I like the connotation of sin in senryu. : )

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Rob Lamberton 28 January 2025

It's a true senryu!

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Richard Wlodarski 15 January 2025

Perfect depiction of how the middle class is quickly being reduced to the lower class due to the excessive greed of the upper class!

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M.J. Lemon 19 January 2025

Too true, Richard. And if things continue, the middle will just disappear before long. Thanks so much for reading, my friend! .

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Richard Wlodarski 07 January 2025

If you changed the word condo to nation, it would perfectly describe Trudeau!

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