Haiku Poem by anju addanki

Haiku

Rating: 5.0


A gush of muddy rain water,
A boat struggling in it:
It drowned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 October 2009

Sudden death like in soccer game Well tailored bearing deep thought. Anju Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lingerie-IG or other poems. niv

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Indira Renganathan 10 August 2009

This haiku gives me a picture of a child helplessly watching a boat drowning in gushing muddy rain water...nice haiku

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Surya . 25 June 2009

a lively situation in a lively composition voted10 surya

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 June 2009

Cute composition.

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