Haiku(2) Poem by Yasmin Khan

Haiku(2)

Rating: 4.5


We long for deep greens
Along the life-giving waters
Thirsty boughs with parched lips

Sunday, June 2, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: giving,lips
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thomas Cole painting Lake with Dead Trees
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 02 June 2013

Simply nice to think and imagine_Soul

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Heather Wilkins 06 June 2013

excellent haiku. thess are some of my favorite forms. well done

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Wahab Abdul 05 June 2013

have you counted the third line? '' thirsty ' has 2 syllables.....but the meaning of the 3rd line is terrific.. love it...excellent! ! 1cracking!

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Shahzia Batool 05 June 2013

Farah ilyas is right, it's deep! ! !

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Farah Ilyas 05 June 2013

Desiccated boughs want water to flourish but fail to do so, same in our life happens, nothing could lessen our burden, our miseries....multi_interpretable Haiku... digging in it still...fabulous

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Indira Babbellapati 03 June 2013

Wonderful.............

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