Yasmeen Khan

Bronze Star - 2,226 Points (Islamabad)

Haiku - Poem by Yasmeen Khan

life a gig with
lamps of memories
lightening the path


Comments about Haiku by Yasmeen Khan

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/12/2015 6:36:00 AM)


    Powerful haiku with philosophical touch.........10 (Report) Reply

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  • Farah Ilyas (5/12/2013 2:21:00 PM)


    Few words have impact of wonder like paradox...yeap memories are the precious treasure for someone if good...
    thanks To share
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (4/25/2013 6:39:00 PM)


    And if they are always meant to be the beacon as you say- - liked the bid here. Haikus are software engg in poetry which tell a lot in very little.Thats why Japs are still Japs.Others just followed. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (4/10/2013 3:35:00 PM)


    Thematically it's a wonderful and meaningful haiku, but being a v humble learner, staying among the master hands i got to know that in the 3 lines of haiku there should be the structure of syllables like this: Line one: 5 Syllables // Line Two: 7 syllables, and again Line three: 5 syllables..., and the way you write, it's very beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (2/3/2013 2:23:00 AM)


    lovely...steeped in wisdom.....
    life in short

    liked
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 3, 2013



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