Haiku 24 The Syllogism Of Life Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Haiku 24 The Syllogism Of Life

Rating: 5.0


days shimmer like leaves
each finds a moment of light
then returns to earth

Monday, December 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Taylor 02 March 2018

Unexpected. Complete. Thank you.

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Jette Blackstone 23 December 2017

Love this one. Haiku and Senryu can be challenging to write....to be able to impart such a beautiful imaged imbued with deep meaning is a gift. Well done.

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Mihaela Pirjol 19 December 2017

Your well-written haiku, somehow, goes in parallel with my haiku '' A Leaf '' I wrote this Autumn.

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