Haiku 77

Rating: 3.8

And all she left him
was that pink old garter belt.
then went to Flagstaff.

Since they had snow there
she got to wear the longjohns
and raise her finger.

She soon forgot him
and his nightly trumpet farts
that's why she left it.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

Quite humorous! Nicely done!

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 10 August 2005

she got to wear the longjohns and raise her finger. Hmmm....sounds like she became something else.......Good write!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 August 2005

Thanks, guys. No the 77 has a special meaning. Undisclosed at this time. H

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Allan James Saywell 09 August 2005

we seem to be covering that word madness in our poetry today Herbert which is good, anything that creates laughter can only be good for the soul Warm regards allan

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 09 August 2005

She did manage to 'raise' something. i can only imagine...lol. this is another 'mental piece'! I enjoyed it! LOL

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