Haiku-A Carpenter And A Poet. Poem by Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Haiku-A Carpenter And A Poet.

Rating: 2.3


A design hovers
Chooses a wood of wild woods,
Weaves a door as poets.

Monday, December 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: abstract,criticism,poem,poet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 03 September 2016

i must be aging quickly. i did not recall reading before today, but i left a previous comment! yes, abstract. and i am not a 'haiku writer', but i wondered about the syllable count. i looked it up and here is one thing i found: Haiku is a traditional form of Japanese poetry. Haiku poems consist of 3 lines. The first and last lines of a Haiku have 5 syllables and the middle line has 7 syllables. The lines rarely rhyme. i count: 6 9 6 line 1..... A/ de/sign/ hov/er/ing ........6 syllables line 2.... Choos/es/ a /wood/ of/ woods/ and/ oth/ers, ...9 syllables line 3... Weaves/ a/ door/ as/ po/ets.....at least 6 syllables; i'm not always sure when there is an s added at the end of some words, as in Weaves. some poets may disagree with what i found online and with my count. bri :) i tend to find strict rules of structure for a poem to be too confining for my taste(s) .

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Bri Edwards 14 August 2016

hopefully the doors formed by poets will always open to me. and bathroom and dining room doors as well. bri :) nice poem

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Randhir Kaur 08 March 2016

I love Haiku writes but ur was something quite unique..Nicely penned..

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Sk. Nurul Huda

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Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India
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