Sk. Nurul Huda

Gold Star - 12,935 Points (Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India)

Haiku-A Carpenter And A Poet. - Poem by Sk. Nurul Huda

A design hovering
Chooses a wood of woods and others,
Weaves a door as poets.

Topic(s) of this poem: abstract, poem, poet

Form: Haiku

Comments about Haiku-A Carpenter And A Poet. by Sk. Nurul Huda

  • Bri Edwards (9/3/2016 7:07:00 PM)

    i must be aging quickly. i did not recall reading before today, but i left a previous comment!

    yes, abstract.

    and i am not a 'haiku writer', but i wondered about the syllable count. i looked it up and here is one thing i found:

    Haiku is a traditional form of Japanese poetry. Haiku poems consist of 3 lines. The first and last lines of a Haiku have 5 syllables and the middle line has 7 syllables. The lines rarely rhyme.

    i count: 6 9 6

    line 1..... A/ de/sign/ hov/er/ing ........6 syllables

    line 2.... Choos/es/ a /wood/ of/ woods/ and/ oth/ers, ...9 syllables

    line 3... Weaves/ a/ door/ as/ po/ least 6 syllables; i'm not always sure when there is an s added at the end of some words, as in Weaves.

    some poets may disagree with what i found online and with my count.

    bri :)

    i tend to find strict rules of structure for a poem to be too confining for my taste(s) .
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  • Bri Edwards (8/14/2016 1:37:00 PM)

    hopefully the doors formed by poets will always open to me.

    and bathroom and dining room doors as well.

    bri :)

    nice poem
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  • Randhir Kaur (3/8/2016 1:59:00 AM)

    I love Haiku writes but ur was something quite unique..Nicely penned.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2015

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