Haiku: A Cloud Poem by Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary
Haiku: A Cloud
A cloud in blue sky
Roaming at random lonely
Like shark in the sea
Monday, March 3, 2008
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
24 March 2008
waiting to disperse their identities.........when the time come.........
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Michael Pruchnicki
03 March 2008
Jyoti - good job but too explicit for a haiku! Suggest by leaving words out! clouds in blue sky that roam - shark fins in water
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