Monday, March 3, 2008

Haiku: A Cloud Comments

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary
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* Sunprincess * 26 June 2014

.............love when they visit, as long as they are friendly...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 March 2008

waiting to disperse their identities.........when the time come.........

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Michael Pruchnicki 03 March 2008

Jyoti - good job but too explicit for a haiku! Suggest by leaving words out! clouds in blue sky that roam - shark fins in water

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
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