Haiku And Senryu - 25 (A Busy Day) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku And Senryu - 25 (A Busy Day)

Rating: 4.1


sun jogs at the sunrise
spreading out its arms copious,
nature awake.

and with the alarm bells
we juggle around with the work
deadlines ignite.

evening sun waits
at the park bench to witness
birds flying to their nest.

and finally the Sunsets
closing its wings back again
nature relaxes.

Saturday, September 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 04 November 2015

A day's journey nicely put in haiku format, Asimji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2015

Definitely sun jugs the sunrise and we fell the rays in wonderful life. Sun waits the spark to witness in minds of many. A very nice and thought provoking wise sets of haiku shared really. Very, very nice....10

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Sanjukta Nag 26 September 2015

Sunrise to sunset... the picture of a busy day in the lap of nature so colourfully portrayed with beautiful finishing touches of imagery...10

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