Haiku - Clouds Poem by Eddie Roa

Haiku - Clouds

Rating: 5.0


Clouds at childish play
Hover on a dry cornfield
Giants cavorting

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jim Norausky 26 January 2009

Great imagery. Well done. Jim

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 January 2009

Good. good.good.good.good

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Sandra Fowler 19 January 2009

Clouds are a wonderful scource for the creation of poetry. Praise for your rich imagination. As always, Sandra

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Eddie Roa 16 January 2009

It's 5-7-5, .... the last stanza reads gi-ants-ca-vor-ting. I'm glad it pleases you. Thanks.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 15 January 2009

I like it...5-7-4? ...is this new Haiku?

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Eddie Roa

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Manila. Philippines
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