Haiku - Cold Poem by Ravi Kopra

Haiku - Cold



He is sitting by
the side of a tall stone wall
shivering in cold

Sunday, February 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
ठिठुरी मारे
दीवार के सहारे
धूप में बैठा

-S.D. Tiwari
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S. D. Tiwari 20 February 2018

Thank you Poet! for choosing my Hindi haiku for translation.This points out to a poor, who beats his cold by sitting in Sun, because he can't afford to have an AC or adequate warm clothes. If I had to translate I'd avoid 'I am' and do it like this - sitting by the wall fights his winter with sunbath the shivering poor

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Ravi Kopra 20 February 2018

Your haiku was an inspiration. I translated on poemhunter one of your other poems about the burning body on a pyre..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 February 2018

Ravi, such a perfect haiku👍👍😊

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