Ravi Kopra


A New Version Of Luo Zhihai Poem: Are Tired And Lazy - Poem by Ravi Kopra

Spring breeze is light
Several peaches are red
Swallows whisper
One willow green

Smoke from the chimney wavers in the wind
Trees are smiling with new buds and leaves
Orioles are back, singing
People are tired and lazy
Basking in the sun.

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  • Luo ZhihaiLuo Zhihai (11/25/2017 3:18:00 AM)

    A New Version Of Luo Zhihai Poem: Are Tired And Lazy

    Poem by Ravi Kopra

    Spring breeze is light
    Several peaches are red
    Swallows whisper
    One willow green

    Smoke from the chimney wavers in the wind
    Trees are smiling with new buds and leaves
    Orioles are back, singing
    People are tired and lazy
    Basking in the sun.

    ◆ Chinese Text

    罗志海新版本诗:倦慵

    拉维•坎普拉 诗 / 罗志海译


    春风轻盈
    几个桃子红
    燕子呢喃
    一株柳树绿

    炊烟风中摇曳
    新芽嫩叶树微笑
    金莺回来歌唱
    人们倦慵
    正晒着太阳


    11/25/2017译
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  • Luo ZhihaiLuo Zhihai (11/25/2017 3:17:00 AM)

    A New Version Of Luo Zhihai Poem: Are Tired And Lazy

    Poem by Ravi Kopra

    Spring breeze is light
    Several peaches are red
    Swallows whisper
    One willow green

    Smoke from the chimney wavers in the wind
    Trees are smiling with new buds and leaves
    Orioles are back, singing
    People are tired and lazy
    Basking in the sun.

    ◆ Chinese Text

    罗志海新版本诗:倦慵

    拉维•坎普拉 诗 / 罗志海译


    春风轻盈
    几个桃子红
    燕子呢喃
    一株柳树绿

    炊烟风中摇曳
    新芽嫩叶树微笑
    金莺回来歌唱
    人们倦慵
    正晒着太阳


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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (10/12/2017 10:06:00 AM)

    Lovely description of spring view. So nice to see another U.S. poet of Indian erackground. Best wishes. (Report)Reply

    Ravi Kopra(10/12/2017 11:33:00 AM)

    Savita, thanks for stopping by.

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (10/12/2017 9:46:00 AM)

    Spring breeze is light
    Several peaches are red
    Swallows whisper
    One willow green

    Found a great Cheff of literature, you can cook out of nothing.
    Great that you could cook one from the Luo Origin!
    Thanks dear fellow poet for the love, care and concern you pay in other's works.
    Bravo.
    Regards.
    Subhas
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    Ravi Kopra(10/12/2017 10:06:00 AM)

    Subash, thanks for the read and for your comment.

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  • Lamar Cole (10/12/2017 9:23:00 AM)

    Very nice and delightful poem to read. (Report)Reply

    Ravi Kopra(10/12/2017 10:07:00 AM)

    Lamar, thanks for the read. The credit must go Luo Zhihai.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 12, 2017

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 12, 2017


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