A New Version Of Luo Zhihai Poem: Are Tired And Lazy Poem by Ravi Kopra

A New Version Of Luo Zhihai Poem: Are Tired And Lazy

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Spring breeze is light
Several peaches are red
Swallows whisper
One willow green

Smoke from the chimney wavers in the wind
Trees are smiling with new buds and leaves
Orioles are back, singing
People are tired and lazy
Basking in the sun.

Thursday, October 12, 2017
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 12 October 2017

Very nice and delightful poem to read.

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Ravi Kopra 12 October 2017

Lamar, thanks for the read. The credit must go Luo Zhihai.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 08 May 2020

Such a beautiful pictures! Enjoyed reading this lovely poem celebrating natural sceneries. Dear Sir Ravi Kopra Ji I'm very happy to have some beautiful and worthy comments.

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Luo Zhihai 25 November 2017

A New Version Of Luo Zhihai Poem: Are Tired And Lazy Poem by Ravi Kopra Spring breeze is light Several peaches are red Swallows whisper One willow green Smoke from the chimney wavers in the wind Trees are smiling with new buds and leaves Orioles are back, singing People are tired and lazy Basking in the sun. ? Chinese Text ???????:?? ??•??? ? / ???? ???? ????? ???? ????? ?????? ??????? ?????? ???? ????? 11/25/2017?

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Luo Zhihai 25 November 2017

A New Version Of Luo Zhihai Poem: Are Tired And Lazy Poem by Ravi Kopra Spring breeze is light Several peaches are red Swallows whisper One willow green Smoke from the chimney wavers in the wind Trees are smiling with new buds and leaves Orioles are back, singing People are tired and lazy Basking in the sun. ? Chinese Text ???????:?? ??•??? ? / ???? ???? ????? ???? ????? ?????? ??????? ?????? ???? ????? 11/25/2017?

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Savita Tyagi 12 October 2017

Lovely description of spring view. So nice to see another U.S. poet of Indian erackground. Best wishes.

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Ravi Kopra 12 October 2017

Savita, thanks for stopping by.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Spring breeze is light Several peaches are red Swallows whisper One willow green Found a great Cheff of literature, you can cook out of nothing. Great that you could cook one from the Luo Origin! Thanks dear fellow poet for the love, care and concern you pay in other's works. Bravo. Regards. Subhas

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Ravi Kopra 12 October 2017

Subash, thanks for the read and for your comment.

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