In My Thoughts, A Hindi Poem By Raj Swami In English Translation Poem by Ravi Kopra
In My Thoughts, A Hindi Poem By Raj Swami In English Translation
So strange are
Your thoughts
You are my destiny
What do I call my desires in my loneliness?
My faithfulness or your sulkiness
That makes me desire you even more
How will I end up thinking of you?
Why don't you come to me sometimes
Why don't you fulfill my desires
With the depths of your heart, sometimes.
WITHOUT your translation we cannot read RAJ SWAMI´s Poem, thank you so much, Ravi. This is a poem of Desires IN the Mind, RAJ´s mind. Passionate, powerful. Thank you for sharing this amazing poem. A 10 Full Vote. G.B. U. Amen
Poignant and wonderful. Thank you for translating, Ravi Kopra.. I love this poet, Raj Swami. Please add Raj Swami's name in the title of your translations. Thank you! :))
Why not you gave my name This is my poem Write translation by Ravi copra
Raj, I will edit the translations and put your name in the titles. I think you deserve it. Jean Larson, who likes your poetry, also recommends it. See her comments.
Yes I seen my 2nd translation poem Great work by you I am too a villager In litrechar my village are very famous Many jaat is my neighbour too. I am vaisnav Where are you from? ?
you are welcome, Raj Swami. I have just translated an another of your poems: main seedhi baat karta hoon in English. You reminded me of a jaat friend of mine from a village in India, who during my school days, spoke straightforwardly like you.
Thank you sir for replying You do your best I am very happy with your great work
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12/1/2023 9:29:21 AM # 1.0.0.1118
Beautiful poem with nice translation. I just read Raj Swami's original one in Hindi. Thanks.