In My Thoughts, A Hindi Poem By Raj Swami In English Translation Poem by Ravi Kopra

In My Thoughts, A Hindi Poem By Raj Swami In English Translation

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So strange are
Your thoughts

You are my destiny
What do I call my desires in my loneliness?

My faithfulness or your sulkiness
That makes me desire you even more

How will I end up thinking of you?
Why don't you come to me sometimes

Why don't you fulfill my desires
With the depths of your heart, sometimes.

This is a translation of the poem मेरा ख्याल by Raj Swami Rajesh
Sunday, April 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 28 January 2019

Beautiful poem with nice translation. I just read Raj Swami's original one in Hindi. Thanks.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2018

WITHOUT your translation we cannot read RAJ SWAMI´s Poem, thank you so much, Ravi. This is a poem of Desires IN the Mind, RAJ´s mind. Passionate, powerful. Thank you for sharing this amazing poem. A 10 Full Vote. G.B. U. Amen

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Jean Larson 01 May 2018

Poignant and wonderful. Thank you for translating, Ravi Kopra.. I love this poet, Raj Swami. Please add Raj Swami's name in the title of your translations. Thank you! :))

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Ravi Kopra 03 May 2018

Thank you Jean. I will put his name in the titles.

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Raj Swami 01 May 2018

Thank you so much for beautiful translations

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Raj Swami 29 April 2018

Why not you gave my name This is my poem Write translation by Ravi copra

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Ravi Kopra 03 May 2018

Raj, I will edit the translations and put your name in the titles. I think you deserve it. Jean Larson, who likes your poetry, also recommends it. See her comments.

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Ravi Kopra 01 May 2018

you are welcome, Raj Swami. I have just translated an another of your poems: main seedhi baat karta hoon in English. You reminded me of a jaat friend of mine from a village in India, who during my school days, spoke straightforwardly like you.

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Raj Swami 01 May 2018

Thank you sir for replying You do your best I am very happy with your great work

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Ravi Kopra 01 May 2018

Your poem was translated as per Poemhunter's guide lines. You do get credit for your original poem. You are mentioned at the end of my translation as - This is a translation of the poem ???? ????? by Raj Swami If you do wish, I will add your name in the title of the poem to the fact that the original poem was written by you. Let me know. I am impressed with your talent noting that you had less than junior high school education. Cheers.

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