fleeting small circles
forming into the puddle ~
drizzle of the rain
May be your poetic age is one year but you sound five years....so cooling in hot summer here
i never write haiku but here seems u trigger me to write forcibly great poem
This is very profound on several levels. I can feel the lightness of drizzle as I read it.
Very good Haiku. Invite you to read mine called RAIN. With a different view. Adeline
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A fine haiku in the best tradition of nature poetry. Especially good considering you are less than a year old: -)