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Haiku Memory Loss Haiku

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no more disk space
grandma deletes all

Haiku Memory Loss Haiku
Thursday, December 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,elderly,haiku,memory,old age ,old memory,poem
Sarah Shahzad 09 December 2019

Your poetry is a pleasure to read...! ! ! thank u for sharing Christina, well i write amazing short poems & interesting creatively web site to :) so please check out..

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Muzahidul Reza 17 December 2018

no more disk space grandma deletes all, ...... the poem finally sounds pangs in heart and mind, extraordinarily you have penned it, dear poetess, congratulations, thanks a lot and welcome here to PoemHunter, I hope your mighty pen will publish more famous poems

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Christina Chin 17 December 2018

Thanks very much for your kind compliments and encouragement! . Very much appreciated

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 December 2018

very nice Haiku. in short you convey a lot....... this i s a special ability. thank u dear Christina

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Christina Chin 16 December 2018

Much appreciated and thanks very much for kind compliments, Dr.tony!

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Tamara Beryl Latham 06 December 2018

You are short of syllables for a Haiku. Usually it's 3 lines. Line 1 has 5 syllables, Line 2 has 7 syllables and Line 3 has 5 syllables for a total of 17 syllables in the poem. You have the following: no more disk space grandma deletes all As you can see it's 4 syllables on the first line and 5 syllables on the second line. Total 9 syllables. You will have to add a few more words. Hope this helps. : -)

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Christina Chin 10 December 2018

Thanks very much, Tamara! I appreciate your suggestions very much, yes, that is if I write formal 5-7-5. My haiku are three or less lines. If 5-7-5 its coincidental. Often I write two lines I also write monostitch. Thank you very much again. Your comment is very much appreciated. Have a great day, warm regards. Christina

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