Haiku........My Biography Poem by Ken e Hall

Haiku........My Biography

Rating: 4.8


Though a fallen star
I am but the leading man
Guiding my family

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

those three lines seems to reveal a lot

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Shashendra Amalshan 16 August 2009

Wowwww... Hey fallen star refers to Lucifer though... I don't think you are that bad... cheerful as an angel aren't you? ? ? ? ..... yet again very nicely done... what bio! ! ! ! ! mind-blowing cheers shan

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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2009

You walk majestically guiding their destiny. CP

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Fiona Davidson 13 May 2009

Excellent write Ken....love the fallen star image....10+++

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

hey nice Haiku- but dont say you the fallen star you the Guiding Star thats what Ill call you top marks for you +++10 anjali

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Kesav Easwaran 06 May 2009

A star...down to earth! Nice ku, Ken...10

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