Haiku: Nature & Life- 17 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Haiku: Nature & Life- 17

Rating: 2.3


1. I’m still
Shadow walks
West-east highway.

2. Insect on the
Yellow pumpkin flower
New life.

3. In the fern forest
Mongooses make love
Beckoning teenage.

Tuesday, August 19, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 30 August 2008

Dear Ashraful i like these haikus that you wrote 3. I’m alone With your Shadow. Insect on the Yellow pumpkin flower New life. there are a few rules in haiku; never philosophise, let the readers do that with your subtle write to derive that haiku feel never make a plain statement haiku like that holds no water pick a specific incident which is so enlightening and inspiring that you cannot help interpreting it into a haiku autumn from the gnarled trees fluttering birds there are actually a lot of poetry sites on haiku. you just have to google search for them

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