Ashraful Musaddeq

Veteran Poet - 1,233 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

Anyone, Someone - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Is it possible?
There is anyone without someone?

Anyone can read
the palmistry of someone's sorrow
Hidden lines of fortune are deep
A lemon-green soul is pale
Leaves fall at midnight on highway.

Anyone can perceive
pre-programmed events of play
Waiting of unkind future
Can see the happenings
That will or to be happened!

Anyone may feel
the air-wave while leaves fall
But can't reach someone's sorrow
With affection by five fingers!



Poem 02
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

Topic(s) of this poem: poem

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Anyone, Someone by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • Marilyn Lott (8/16/2012 8:13:00 AM)

    Interesting description of human heart and feelings. Always is the need to love and be loved. (Report)Reply

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  • Akram Saqib (10/10/2009 2:11:00 PM)

    logical arguments run through out the poem, great effort (Report)Reply

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  • (8/30/2009 11:30:00 PM)

    THE POEM BRINGS OUT THAT ABSENT HUMAN TOUCH IN OUR LIVES!
    Must be a translation from your Bengali verse, - which sounds great! 10!
    -Raj
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  • (8/10/2009 5:49:00 AM)

    It's not possible! we always yearn to be loved, we have to be loved, we were born to loved....! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/2/2009 12:18:00 PM)

    Lovely, as always! You do care about life, about the inner man...
    10!
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  • (7/12/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    I do not care for ratings - I wrote
    All I write may not be true poetry
    Mere glass baubles compared
    To the gems and pearls found
    In the vast treasury of PoemHunter.
    But, I do no justice if I don't rate you
    As the tender poet who sings from his soul
    Nature you adore
    Life you worship and
    Humanity you love!
    My humble respect to your wonderful thoughts
    Your poems make a difference in our hearts!
    Angel
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  • (7/12/2009 3:06:00 AM)

    anyone is always someone's friend...

    someone will always inspire anyone....grace
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  • (7/1/2009 1:13:00 PM)

    There is anyone without someone?
    Really awesome sir..............
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  • (6/28/2009 1:10:00 PM)

    Beyond the senses
    you take us Ashraful,
    masterful.

    John
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2009 8:33:00 PM)

    Anyone may feel
    the air-wave while leaves fall
    But can’t reach someone’s sorrow
    With affection by five fingers!

    .... if r five finger can once touch the hair, all sorrows will disappear. that is what is need of the hour.... beautiful writes. hats off to poet...10
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  • (6/11/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    brilliant poem, makes you think....well penned (Report)Reply

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  • (6/5/2009 11:06:00 AM)

    Anyone may feel
    the air-wave while leaves fall
    But can’t reach someone’s sorrow
    With affection by five fingers!

    ...again wonderful thought process.....Loved these lines as they tell so many things...10+...Brishti Mazumdar
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  • Smiley Hooker (5/22/2009 1:42:00 AM)

    i don't think so, sir. we can feel the emptiness or any emotions because we are humans. but life isn't bad or good all the time. it's how we see it or how we appreciate it. what a beautiful poem! : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) (Report)Reply

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  • (5/20/2009 2:17:00 AM)

    Sadness has different shades and it often keeps the man company.
    'But can’t reach someone’s sorrow
    With affection by five fingers! ' - beautiful! I like it very much. (10v.) Greetings. :)
    Maria Barbara Korynt
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  • (5/19/2009 4:20:00 AM)

    how if I can rate it 1000+... just justified! ! !

    wonder of thoughts that you have soft questions of deep senses... and it does not make any difference if these are answered or not! ! just a 'value question' is worth a step! !

    lovely work dear Ashraful Musaddeq!
    top rated :)
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  • (5/14/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    Wonderful imagery and colour. Your last stanza
    conveys your profound message.10 without hesitation.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • Vidi Writes (4/26/2009 5:14:00 AM)

    A query of the worried mind
    Surrounded - may be by many
    But close to none.
    A feeling so close to everyone's heart

    Good expressions in each line.

    Thank you for this read.
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  • Meggie Gultiano (4/26/2009 3:30:00 AM)

    this is nicely penned (Report)Reply

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  • Deo Inji (10/3/2008 2:23:00 PM)

    Loneliness is a phenomenal feeling that many silently deal with in their hearts... Many of us may try to conceal it; but just as you begun the last three stanzas with 'Anyone can read', 'Anyone can perceive' and 'Anyone may feel' shows that we can't always conceal it. It shows in the eyes, even when you try to smile. It's such a beautiful poem...Deo (Report)Reply

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  • (9/26/2008 8:46:00 PM)

    goood poem...enjoyed.... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 21, 2018


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