Raymond Farrell

Gold Star - 26,042 Points (02/09/1954 / Perth, Ontario)

Haiku (Pick Your Pain) - Poem by Raymond Farrell

Pick your pain - the pain
Of discipline or the pain
Of regret - your move.

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/15/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    It is a choice. Thanks, Ray (Report) Reply

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  • (11/15/2015 7:49:00 AM)

    Very meaningful haiku pertinent to prevailing situation and need of the hour to avoid pain of regret. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/15/2015 7:26:00 AM)

    You have raised a timely and valid question and the answer is quite obvious. the pain of discipline is the need of the hour to combat the pain of regret. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/15/2015 6:12:00 AM)

    well-composed haiku, your feelings are well expressed in the lines, thanks for sharing, Great poet, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015

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