Haiku (Pick Your Pain) Poem by Raymond Farrell

Haiku (Pick Your Pain)

Rating: 5.0


Pick your pain - the pain
Of discipline or the pain
Of regret - your move.

Sunday, November 15, 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 15 November 2015

It is a choice. Thanks, Ray

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 November 2015

Very meaningful haiku pertinent to prevailing situation and need of the hour to avoid pain of regret. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Rajnish Manga 15 November 2015

You have raised a timely and valid question and the answer is quite obvious. the pain of discipline is the need of the hour to combat the pain of regret. Thanks.

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Shakil Ahmed 15 November 2015

well-composed haiku, your feelings are well expressed in the lines, thanks for sharing, Great poet, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments

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Raymond Farrell

Raymond Farrell

Perth, Ontario
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