Haiku Poems Poem by Saravanan Sivasubramanian

Haiku Poems

Rating: 3.3


For the dead leader


The silence paid by the tribute


The sound of birds



From black color saree


Blooming flowers


The shadow of the tree on the river



April sunshine


while crosses the bridge of the river


I have seen The craving of the mother

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Dear sir, Thanks for your suggestions. I will not misunderstand. I always welcome your suggestions

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Rajendran Muthiah 12 June 2017

Silence of the birds, was the real glowing tribute, to the dead leader. (5- 7- 5) syllable structure. In this way the following lines can also be reshaped. I availed so much freedom to give suggestions to you because I feel that you will not misunderstand my concern for you. Please make tireless efforts.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 May 2017

Very nice indeed. Thanks

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