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Haiku Poem

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The plane is touching the cloud


What a great surprise


The sky falls into the sea

Wednesday, May 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 05 May 2017

the falling of the sky into the sea is dramatised in such short verses. thank you dear poet. tony

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thanks. encourage me in also in future

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thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2018

Muse with the clouds! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 29 August 2017

Nice thought provoking poem with good usage of imagery. A great work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Segun Johnson Ozique 25 June 2017

Thought provoking...thank you.

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Bharati Nayak 11 May 2017

What a great surprise- - - - there is a sense of wonder- - - - - Thank you for your haiku.

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thank u madam for your comments

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Nice to read the haiku, thank you

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thanks sir

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