Haiku Poem Poem by Saravanan Sivasubramanian

Haiku Poem

Rating: 4.9


The plane is touching the cloud


What a great surprise


The sky falls into the sea

Wednesday, May 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 05 May 2017

the falling of the sky into the sea is dramatised in such short verses. thank you dear poet. tony

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thanks. encourage me in also in future

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thanks

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Nice to read the haiku, thank you

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thanks sir

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C. Muralidara Kannan 16 March 2024

An excellent haiku! என்னே சிந்தனை! வியந்தனம் யாம்.

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Brook Renwick 28 January 2022

I can see two horizons in this poem. The plane and the ocean. Is that because you have to choose between two options?

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 January 2022

Wow! Wonderful. Loved it…

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2018

Muse with the clouds! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 29 August 2017

Nice thought provoking poem with good usage of imagery. A great work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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