Haiku - Pure Nature Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Pure Nature

Rating: 4.9


snow capped mountains
everything painted in white
purity, hallmark

Monday, September 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 29 September 2020

As a true lover of nature, you have always been an explorer of its pristine beauty wherever it might be available. Snow-capped mountains are one such place- impeccable and the pinnacle of purity. Thanks, Asim ji, for this remarkable poem.

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Varsha M 28 September 2020

Signature mark of winters on hilltop. Beautiful.

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* Sunprincess * 28 September 2020

Excellent haiku. Purity is the hallmark so is the nature.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 28 September 2020

You have rightly understood nature and all natural happenings. The glimpse of purity matters a lot with beauty and this is witnessed during snowfall. Snow's colour is white and this colour is symbol of purity. White ihram clothing makes no difference between ruler, people, poor and richer. During Dhu al-Hijjah wearing white clothes all people look so equal during Hajj pilgrimage journey!

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 28 September 2020

White is so pure and white is so calm. We regard white colour as purely symbol of purity and worship. Snow's colour is worn by mountains and trees during snowfall. Nature is painted during such period and Earth looks like heavenly white angel. Your love for nature is very well reflected through your perception about snowfall. This poem seems to be very fabulous and I have rated full stars for this poem!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 September 2020

Should you want to read comments on your poems instantly then follow me and my instructions. Go to manage poems then under Poems section you will find manage comments about my poems. From here you can see who gave comments. Don''t forget to write comments on my poems MAN. yeah asim this I know but why is PH not posting comments on my poems so that others can also read and grade these thanks ASIM G

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Suzon Albert 29 September 2020

That is a perfect Haiku.

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Gordon Walter 29 September 2020

Brilliant poem. I enjoyed it

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Michael Jack 29 September 2020

Your mystic approach towards life is amusing, at times I see a deep philosophy hidden inside those simple words that you write to convey your message, though it appears simple but they are far complex for deep thinkers. You are a philosopher of this era.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 September 2020

Snow white hugs mountain! Haggard skin for biting cool It's seeking hearth warmth////

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