Haiku - Sad Poem by Don Haney

Haiku - Sad

Rating: 4.8


mountains that arise
clouds that darken the day sky
sad I sit and cry

Revised

mountains rise
clouds darken the sky
I sit and cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeeb Alfateh 17 June 2019

mountains rise clouds darken the sky I sit and cry excellent 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

Such lovely haiku's! Nicely done!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Perfect and very open. Nice

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 July 2005

half of the mount bathed in light bahted in shadow

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Hopeu Likadapoem 21 July 2005

Love it, short and to the point, says alot

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Don Haney

Don Haney

Dallas, Texas
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