Haiku - Swallows Peeh Peeh Poem by Ravi Kopra

Haiku - Swallows Peeh Peeh

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a flock of swallows
flap wings like an air ballet
singing peeh peeh songs

in cool autumn breeze
flocks of swallows flying and
singing peeh peeh songs

when you hear peeh peeh
look up in the sky, flocks of
swallows flying high

swallows have tails like
a pair of scissors cutting
off air as they fly

Wednesday, May 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: flying
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Synchronised Flight (Haiku) - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

a flock of swallows
fly in a synchronised dance
of techno music

-Mihaela Pirjol
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 17 May 2018

I am glad to see my haiku has inspired more creativity!

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Robert Murray Smith 16 May 2018

Ravi, youvhave penned a wonderful nature poem.+++10

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Weslee Sampel 16 May 2018

oh my a haiku. I love it, you just remind me to write one 10++++

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