Ravi Kopra

So Beautiful Is She

When I saw her for the first time
I got mesmerized
dreaming blue eyes
so beautiful
short curly wavy blond hair
a huge pleasant smile
dimples, not wrinkles
she looked so youthful, cheerful
hypnotized, I swayed
what could happen I thought
if I kept on looking at her!

I do not know.

But what do I know is this:
if De Vinci had seen her once
Mona Lisa would not be in the Louvre.

I cannot forget her blue eyes
her face, her heart warming smile
I close my eyes and still
I see her vividly.

Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful, beauty

Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 12, 2017
Poem Edited: Thursday, May 23, 2019

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (3/21/2020 10:38:00 PM)

    A perfect vision of beauty and love.
    Mesmerised by this beautiful poem.......10

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (1/24/2019 1:13:00 AM)

    I cannot forget her blue eyes/her face, her heart warming smile....lovely expression! My pleasure revisiting this elegant love poem filled with true spirit of love and tenderness!

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  • Pamela (4/29/2018 9:22:00 AM)

    I love this poem

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  • Pamela (4/12/2018 11:35:00 AM)

    Intriguing

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (3/5/2018 6:52:00 AM)

    It's lovely piece of poetry! I am utterly fascinated by two lines: 'I cannot forget her blue eyes/her face, her heart warming smile...Thanks dear sir for sharing! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

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  • Seamus O BrianSeamus O Brian (2/15/2018 11:44:00 AM)

    How piercing is the stab of beauty, and the fatal wound it leaves behind. A vivid reminder of our vulnerability to the charms of physical allure.

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  • Ravi Kopra (2/1/2018 1:26:00 PM)

    Thank you Rajesh. for stopping by and for your comment.

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  • T.RAJESH (2/1/2018 10:09:00 AM)

    This is really a beautiful poem written with great conviction. The following lines, I think, would be the icing on the cake.
    If De Vinci had seen her once
    Mona Lisa would not be in the Louvre.

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  • Ravi Kopra (12/14/2017 11:55:00 PM)

    Thank you Rajendra for stopping by and for your comment.

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  • Rajendra RoutRajendra Rout (12/14/2017 11:36:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem on love having
    stunning expression.thanks for shairing.........10++++++++

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  • Geetha JayakumarGeetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 3:23:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem painted by artistic heart......

    But what do I know is this:
    If De Vinci had seen her once
    Mona Lisa would not be in the Louvre.

    Congratulations for the beautiful poem selected. Loved reading it. I got delayed in wishing for the same.

    Thank you Ravi Ji for commenting on my poem Untold Words.

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    Ravi Kopra(12/14/2017 11:53:00 PM)

    Thanks and welcome

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  • Ravi Kopra (10/28/2017 4:03:00 AM)

    Thank you all, my dear readers
    you made my day
    I cannot reply to you individually
    I hope you'd understand
    But I promise I will keep on
    writing beautiful poems for you

    and

    thanks to poemhunter.com
    for selecting my poem for the day.

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  • Lucinda Balgooyen (10/27/2017 7:47:00 PM)

    Bravo! You completely captured my attention by leaving the door to your heart swinging wide open. I saw through your eyes, and felt your emotions.

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (10/27/2017 7:05:00 PM)

    Your words captured us. Just as the the picture you have in your mind.
    Thank you

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (10/27/2017 5:14:00 PM)

    The power of physical beauty even if it is just a mere photo. Very well presented.

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  • Sochukwu Ivye (10/27/2017 1:32:00 PM)

    Clearly 'painted' accumulated emotions.
    Congrats, poet.

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  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (10/27/2017 1:28:00 PM)

    Congratulations for poem of the day.. Beautifully written about an admiration

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (10/27/2017 12:46:00 PM)

    Full of passion and energy. That is the power of love. Above all, the entry of Da Vinchi
    brings in the classic touch to this wonderful expression. Thanks and Congrats, Ravi ji.

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (10/27/2017 10:54:00 AM)

    Thank God, finally you are in love...now onwards you would never be after mere chalks,
    Thanks Ravi for being so romantic for moments, at least that day till you finished composing it.

    Loved these gigantic lines filled with intense love with a giraffe altitude of poetic skill.

    Hypnotized, I swayed
    What could happen I thought
    if I kept on looking at her!

    Thanks for the poem,10+++++++ for it.
    Congrats for the POTD selection.
    Subhas

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (10/27/2017 10:18:00 AM)

    Its a very interesting poem. When you fall in love with a girl she becomes the most beautiful on earth. Nice description. Nicely done. Congrats.

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