Haiku: The House Fly Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Haiku: The House Fly

Rating: 5.0


Food- under cover;
A house fly is attempting
To lick on my lips!

Dated: 17th Sept 2022.



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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 18 September 2022

Amazing Haiku, but with a fly as a subject my brave heart has got angst, though 5 Stars TOP Score for this 'merciless' haiku. A fly is the dirtiest insect of all insects, mind you, dear Poet But still an amazing Haiku

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Kim Barney 17 September 2022

Just don't lick your lips after the fly has licked them!

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