The tongue, in dance
Vibrates the air molecule
To run as a wave.
In short you illustrated the talk..10
Nice to have a comment from you poet Rini Jerry. With thanks.
Physics in a poem, poem physics. Like it! !
Fabulous haiku penned with such powerful expression. Brilliant Pallab! ...10 + To my Favourites
Another beautiful poem my very dear Pallua, thanks for sharing!
The dance of the tongue and the song of the mind, dear poet. Loved it..
Truly an excellent haiku, dear Pallab, most appreciated and such a pleasant read 5 Stars full on-TOP again Between brackets, on line 1 you missed one syllable. Humble suggestion, the word 'When' fits in
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
How well the whole concept has been expressed. Loved it. Thanks.
Happy to see your valuable comment on the haiku. With regards.
Thank you so much for the encouraging words..