Friday, November 11, 2022

Haiku….Optimism Comments

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Each new day brings hope,
Never giving up on dreams,
Hoping they come true.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 13 November 2022

dream, hope, do exactly and enjoy the reality

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Anjandev Roy 12 November 2022

This is absolutely perfect.....thanks for sharing...

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David Wood 11 November 2022

You've conquered the Haiku, Jayne. Now try a Senryu - same three lines of 5,7,5 syllables.

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 November 2022

Done and dusted David. : ) Thank you x

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 November 2022

Loved the optimistic stance of the poetess. Full marks.

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 November 2022

Thank you x Much appreciated!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

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