Half Done Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Half Done

Rating: 5.0


Unmet debt, and left out forest fire,
Left alive foes when new life acquire
Prevail time and again,
Proving perennial pain,
Half-done is whole headache, life time's ire.
Bring to end what's begun,
Never leave it half-done,
Half-hearted steps may sink men in mire.
Yet, as go warning bells
The lady laze us tells,
It's all fine, death's still far, far from dire.
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Words well said | 40.11.14 |

Saturday, July 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fire
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ancient wisdom of state-craft called nīti-shāstra.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2019

Half-done is whole headache, life time's ire. Bring to end what's begun, Never leave it half-done, ......so true. Half-done mustn't be left behind, A beautiful poem with nice theme is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

Thanks for reading the ditty and liking it, dear poet KM.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 July 2019

" Half- hearted steps may sink men in mire" A meaningful thought provoking limerick. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

Thanks indeed RM for appreciating this one.

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