Hammering On My Verses Poem by suzan gumush

Hammering On My Verses



Hey ho fiddle diddle diddle
Do they dally on my words
Do this.... change that
The list is endless
Which play shall I staged
Well excuse me
If I've come to affend thee
This is how I write
No I wont rhyme the next word
Incase it bothers you
It's simple....
Don't read my
Itchy bitchy words

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trinity K 17 November 2006

dont even bother to hear....dont ever change for anything......

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Brian Dorn 04 October 2006

Great write, Suzan! I wouldn't change a thing... point well made! ! Brian

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Asma Bahrainwala 03 October 2006

an interesting lil' pc... 'hammering'......ahem! ....quite a strong word... enjoyed reading this 1... 'Incase it bothers you It's simple.... Don't read my Itchy bitchy words '...fair enuf! :) love... asma...

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