Human Behaviour Or Labour Poem by suzan gumush

Human Behaviour Or Labour

Rating: 5.0


I don't want to
Serve hand and foot!
Everyone I've met
Was a legal crook!
Underneath those rules they hide
We have all! ....
Been taken for a ride!
Love is no more
Than a daily chore
We only eat
Chemically implanted food
Dodgeing our brains
To regulate our moods
O.k....So I've said it! ...
Can't you see!
We've all been stitched!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 24 October 2008

what you say is all as it is - and no more - Suzan. legal crooks abound, but they do not rob us of what we are, just what they think they need from us, and that we can easily cast away, give it to them, for having lost it, we are cleaner, better.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 October 2008

Suzan...you go gal, and tell it like it be....Enjoyed this energetic slice of erudite expression, young lady! ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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Ernestine Northover 11 October 2008

Yes indeed you are absolutely right! ! ! ! Very well said and a nice write to find. Enjoyed this one. love and hugs Ernestine XXX Hope all is well with you.

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