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Happy Birthday

Rating: 5.0

I have purchased a portrait
A beautiful woman‘s picture was there.
For once I thought I know her
But then felt otherwise
I could not remember perfectly.
But was feeling a pain deep inside my heart
I saw the picture whole night.
The picture’s lady hypnotized me.
She was saying something, but she can’t.
Her sparking eye’s says “kiss me”.

My subconscious mind, did not allow me.
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Marieta Maglas 06 September 2009

interesting lyric surrealistic poem, Subham, a true enigma.Thank you for sharing.....10++++

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Luwi Habte 04 September 2009

Dear subham this is so nice poem it seems that it is dedicated for some one lovely nice at all luwi

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 September 2009

Loved the way penned you the love feelings! 10+

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Brishti Mazumdar 31 August 2009

I think, this poem is attached to some personal feelings which are difficult for outsiders to connect with. I liked your thought process except that blood spot.This spot contradicts the lover's image....good wishes...

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Sukumar Choudhuri 12 September 2009

You said Rabindranath is your favourite poet. In one of his writings Tagore wrote 'Eto Rakto Keno' (Why so much of blood strains......) Could you recollect? Can you define me brother why 'There was small blood spot' in such a beautiful imagery?

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Surya . 12 September 2009

vow! what a great imagination! great poem. voted10 surya

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Hazem Al Jaber 12 September 2009

wow! i am amazed by this poem very very nice and it jus touches me so much… i give u 10 stars! ! keep up with the good work! ! beautiful gift.. hazem al...

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 11 September 2009

'Happy Birthday' a beautiful birthday gift! thanks for sharing.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 06 September 2009

Fantastic finale! ! Nice poetic-paradigm-shift. I’d have finished it with, ‘……… ‘ You guess please. Ten+++ dr.sakti

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