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Happy Grave

Rating: 5.0

My lovely kitten,
Eternity kissed,
You brought miracle joy
With your beaming brown eyes;
You delivered visions,
You let the mind drift
Into esoteric meditations
Like satellites
Into planetary explorations;
I now find God in mysterious dreams

Where door locks unbolt
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Ivy Christou 11 December 2005

Lovely poem Uriah.. I have cats too and you can tell the difference between their unselfish and unconditional love and the one that most people have to offer. well done! HBH

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Ernestine Northover 10 December 2005

Aaaahhhhh! ! ! We are back to CATS again Uriah. Lovely Lovely. Puurrrr! Puurrrr! Love Ernestine XXX

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Mary Nagy 09 December 2005

Such a tender love between a man and his pet...........very touching. I hope your pain turns to happy memories soon. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 09 December 2005

Well you know how I feel about felines Uriah...this was such a beautiful poem and I enjoyed it as always!

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Hugh Cobb 09 December 2005

Uriah: As a lover of the feline species, I definitely connected with this piece. I love the metaphysical turn and by the by, I disagree with Raynette. The word feathers is definitely linked to the idea of the Angels & by extension their wings. I think she may have missed that reference. A sweet, hopeful and loving poem! (10 from me.) HDC

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Sandra Fowler 09 December 2005

this is a poem deeply felt. Nothing beautiful is ever really lost. Thanks for sharing it, Uriah.The last stanza is filled with light. Regards, Sandra

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Raynette Eitel 09 December 2005

Your last stanza is so full of hope. Wish you'd write a whole poem around that last stanza. There are some nice things in this one, Uriah, but throw out 'feather.' It doesn't belong in a poem about a kitten. Just my opinion, of course. Raynette

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