Happy Onam Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Happy Onam

Rating: 5.0


</>Dark mansoon clouds...
Left the sky canvas
Appeared Blue sky and
Again onam days

The great Mahabali
Our Ancient kingdom
Brought our minds
Peace and Harmony

No theft and lie
No poor and charity
The pleasant Rotation
Of beauty life cycle

Let us remember again
On those good days
With flower and songs
Happy ONAM again..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hebert Logerie Sr. 02 September 2009

Happy Onam, a day of celebration, a day of beauty, flowers and songs. Well versed....

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

well expresed poem, thank you for sharing..................10+++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 September 2009

Happy Onam to you Vinod.Its a nice celebration poem.

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Surya . 03 September 2009

indeed it was an ultimate dream rule the like of which perhaps remain a dream.excellent write. voted10 suryua

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Nandita Nambiar (child) 20 August 2018

Please write bigger poems! !

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Rekha Mandagere 15 March 2011

Glory of our nice tradition is beautifully captured in rhythm. Good work.

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Sandra Fowler 10 September 2009

The beauty of past values cannot be overestimated. Always a pleasure to read you. Kind wishes. Sandra

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Marvin Brato 08 September 2009

Inspiring poetry, well penned!

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Rachel Butler 06 September 2009

With flower and songs Happy ONAM again.. Rachel Ann Butler

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Vinod Kumar U K

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