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Hate (11/7/08) - Poem by Kayleigh ....

I hate to smile
I hate to laugh
I hate to giggle and grin
I hate to skip
I hate to dance
I hate to twirl and spin
I hate the sun
I hate the stars
I hate that sort of thing
I hate the grass
I hate the trees
I hate the birds that sing
I hate the sea
I hate the sand
I hate the seashells too
I hate the world
I hate it all
I hate that all I don't hate is you

Comments about Hate (11/7/08) by Kayleigh ....

  • (11/12/2008 6:20:00 AM)

    you love him enough...but don't hate all those wonderful things you listed...your presentation i liked 10 (Report) Reply

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  • (11/10/2008 11:41:00 PM)

    very nice Kayleigh
    after the first few lines I thought just a typical subject from a 13 year old until I got to 'twirl and spin' and each line kept me going to the final double negative twist and I say 'superb' about this poem
    I also find humor in this poem because it speaks to the basic flaw of what I call 'image poetry' by expressing negative thoughts about the typical subjects
    I have found that the fans of image poetry are often overly serious about the style and its importance - to the degree of not recognizing other forms
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 7, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, November 2, 2009

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